5 comments on “Prey

  1. I approached this story, with eager anticipation; only, to find it over almost before it had started. Kinda like “fast food”, ‘stead of a full meal. Your victim, didn’t even have a name! I’d like to see more! Whatcha got?

    • I know, right? This was originally written for a flash fiction contest with a 500 word count maximum. I really wanted to focus on the chase and the victim’s fear. In saying that, there really WAS no ‘getting to know you’ period for our unfortunate victim. I’ll definitely be posting more stories in the future. Thanks for reading and for your comment 😉 Much appreciated!

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